EternityFree - Looking for some help

[EternityFree]

Hey there! I'm simply looking for reviews on my frontend. I'm aware that some of the information isn't correct. I'm trying to get flat icons to show above the features, so yeah, that's pretty ugly right now. I'm still working on a logo and getting an SSL cert. Anyway, thanks in advance!

 

http://eternityfree.com

[EternityFree]

I'm constantly working on it so it will always be slightly diffrent.

[TinkerMan]

1) You have a redirect error for mobile users

 

2) Having a separate landing page for mobile users is something that’s kind of phased out. Just design you homepage mobile-first. It’s way easier to maintain and update as well. 
 

3) You need more margin on the two sub-CTA button at the top of the landing on smaller screens. 
 

4) 24/7 Uptime does not happen. It’s also impossible to guarantee. 
 

5) login/signup buttons don’t work, but I assume you know that

 

6) Terms don’t say anything about content uploaded, or how suspensions are managed. You can use the terms that MOFH provides if you wish, they are a good starting ground. 
 

7) privacy policy does not describe how information is stored, how long it is stored, how to access it, how to delete it. Some states (like californiana) and some countries (like Brazil) have rules that you need to address in this statement. 

[EternityFree]

42 minutes ago, TinkerMan said:

1) You have a redirect error for mobile users

 

2) Having a separate landing page for mobile users is something that’s kind of phased out. Just design you homepage mobile-first. It’s way easier to maintain and update as well. 
 

3) You need more margin on the two sub-CTA button at the top of the landing on smaller screens. 
 

4) 24/7 Uptime does not happen. It’s also impossible to guarantee. 
 

5) login/signup buttons don’t work, but I assume you know that

 

6) Terms don’t say anything about content uploaded, or how suspensions are managed. You can use the terms that MOFH provides if you wish, they are a good starting ground. 
 

7) privacy policy does not describe how information is stored, how long it is stored, how to access it, how to delete it. Some states (like californiana) and some countries (like Brazil) have rules that you need to address in this statement. 

Heya! So, everything you mentioned I am totally aware of I'm removing the mobile warning. I know 24/7 uptime is impossible to guarantee. Thank you for letting me know the buttons where too close, I thought the same thing. 

 

Thanks for looking out!

[EternityFree]

I just fixed everything let me know if you notice anything else!

[SpookyKipper]

I recommend you just make the buttons to go to the full Terms/PrivacyPolicy page, having two is confusing

 

Most people skip pass them anyways so there is no need to simplify it

[TinkerMan]

15 hours ago, TinkerMan said:

You need more margin on the two sub-CTA button at the top of the landing on smaller screens. 

Not fixed

 

2) If I click on the “see out full privacy policy” I get redirected to the terms, not the privacy policy. Should probably be fixed. 
 

3) You forgot to change the brand name in the terms. And you should certainly read and understand them yourself, or have a lawyer do it for you, before publishing them. 
 

4) It’s not obvious when clicking the terms/pp button on the landing page that it’s only a summary. I would change the card header (Or just redirect the user directly to the full terms)